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looking at giraffe by Lara
Each day one writing group, blog instead of write in books. These blog posts are not perfect they are childrens' work.
Monday 21 May 2012
Ezekiel
the Baby
giraffe kdt sdanup and it sdand up and it want in zoo wan it went
wos bag
The baby
giraffe couldn't stand up and it stood up and it went to the zoo when it was
big
Dania
I saw A
giraffe it was little and slleping that is the end of my stooy
I saw a
giraffe it was little and sleeping and that is the end of my story.
Pepe
I see a
boy giraffe it's narm was zubulu.The giraffe was oring.
I see a
boy giraffe it's name was Zubulu. The giraffe was orange.
Cathrine
The baby
giraffe was ling din and the mother giraffe was afraed.
The baby
giraffe was lying down and the mother giraffe was afraid.
Te Ata
I saw the
mother giraffe It had tow baby bos and I woch It wete my clus to.
I saw the
mother giraffe it had two baby boys and I watched it with my class.
Bently
I saw the
giraffe it had a baby and it was rod a bat the baby and it sodo it.
I saw the
giraffe it had a baby and it was worried about the baby and it stood on it.
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