Each day one writing group, blog instead of write in books.
These blog posts are not perfect they are childrens' work.
Wednesday 25 February 2015
Claire
In the weekend my
friend came over we had fish and chips
for dinner then we went out side to play on mybike then we watched
the sky lantern then we watched a movie then we went to bed it was fun the next
day he went home
Great work Claire. Could you add some different punctuation to make your story flow better? Mrs B :)
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